Rachel provided an incredibly professional and insightful developmental edit that has truly helped elevate my story. Her feedback was thorough, constructive, and actionable, offering clear guidance on how to strengthen my manuscript.

She delivered valuable insights into my FMC and MMC’s character arcs, as well as those of my supporting characters, highlighting what worked well and how their development could be deepened to ensure they felt fully fleshed out and relatable. Additionally, she addressed the chemistry, conflict, and emotional impact throughout each chapter, pinpointing areas that resonated and areas that could be expanded for a stronger, well-rounded romance.

Rachel’s keen attention to plot and pacing helped me identify where the story slowed down and provided strategies to refine its structure, ensuring a more engaging reading experience. Her thoughtful suggestions on enhancing my writing style and author voice brought to light small but impactful changes that will make a significant difference in achieving the tone I envisioned.

Throughout the entire process, Rachel was professional, timely, and thorough. She not only met the agreed-upon deadline but delivered her feedback ahead of schedule. Her approach was encouraging and constructive—she celebrated the strengths of my manuscript while offering insightful suggestions for improvement in a way that felt both supportive and motivating.

I highly recommend Rachel to any writer looking to take their story to the next level. Her expertise, professionalism, and keen editorial eye make her an invaluable asset to the revision process.